It's cool. There are two others I like. I will ponder them for a day, and hopefully at least one will not be swept away!
But I dunno, I dunno. I have four finished but unedited fics sitting around, and am taking an ass-whipping writing class (my mentor wants me to write the first 60 pages of a novel, plus comment on other folks' work, plus read a novel and his tome of a text book in four weeks), and I'm getting so gelatinous sitting on my bum all day. BUT THE FIC IS SO FUN I CAN'T RESIST. And I haven't even been reading fic! Have to do that, too.
In conclusion, someone pause time. Please?