nattish

I have (mostly) finished editing my story for the Flashficathon and have sent it away to be beta-ed. Now I wonder, would anyone be willing to Britpick it for me? I normally don't do this sort of thing, but I figured that since this story is for someone else I could put more effort into it. Any takers? The person the story is for is not on my list, so no worries there. :)

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Also, I am very tired of hearing about the presidential elections. It can't be helped, of course, and it will go on until for the rest of the year, but I'm even hearing it on sports shows and radio commercials and at the store! It never seemed to annoy me like this.