The story is in Remus's point of view, so here is the trouble: When Remus is having sex with someone, how does he refer to their nether regions? He is an adult here, around the time of OotP, and I think that is also a good thing to take into account.
I have been using 'prick' so far, and I am pretty satisfied with it, because it sounds adult in size to me and not as vulgar as some others. As for 'buttocks' I am stumped. Any suggestions? :D
Which 'penis' term do you recommend for this situation?
Which 'buttocks' term do you recommend for this situation?
Do you know whether 'arse' is taken in the same manner as 'ass'?
Any other comments on the matter would be great!