This is very petty of me, but when I read this sentence my heart leaped.
"...[Snape's] big yellow teeth were bared..."
An author who actually admits Snape's yellow teeth! Glee.
How many cherries is too many cherries? *scrunches nose* 7? 70?
Ah! And I've never read a Fred/George so incredibly...erm...plausible. I don't mind incest in the least, but I'm not particularly fond of Fred/George at this point. Telanu, you may have actually triggered something else in me. <3