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FIC: Draco Malfoy and the Secret Inheritance (Part 3)

Draco Malfoy and the Secret Inheritance -- PART 3
by Natt

Pairing: Harry/Draco
Summary: Draco is pregnant. Pregnant! At age 16, no less, and (if you hadn’t noticed) he’s a bloke. How on Earth did this happen? If that’s not upsetting enough, he has no idea who fathered the damn thing. Lust, lies, and scandal abound! NC-17, EWE

Total Word Count: 47k

A/N: This is the conclusion! The end! Thank you for reading and enjoying and yay!

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Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

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Now on AO3


Rec: FIC: Draco Malfoy and the Secret Inheritance (Part 3)

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“Draco lived with the Dark Lord for a year and fought with a bum wand during the Battle. He’s more a man than you’ve ever been.”
^- Oh my god, BLESS YOU, GOYLE.

Oh, poor angsting Draco baby. And poor daft Harry. And they're just so cute together when they finally get alone and Harry just is like, Fuck this *KISS*.

And -
" “You know I won’t stop trying until you give me my girl,” he said, moving slowly. “I’ll knock you up ten times, if I have to. Just the thought of you swollen with my child—”
Ahhhhhh. whY DOES THAT always gross me out with het pregnancies but it makes me so ridiCULOUSLY HAPPY IN GAY ONES ugh what.

"Harry flung the sheets back over himself, only to realize I had magicked on his sweatpants and cleaned us up, too. Did his cute dumb-arsery know no bounds?"
Fffffft awww. XD

“Because you broke it!”
“Nuh-uh, you broke it with your face!”

Oh, geez, our nephews have had almost this same conversation, but about a finger instead of a face. XD

"If it’s not a girl this time, I’m done. You can run off and adopt one of those orphans you’re always rescuing from trees"
YUP, I CAN SEE IT.

“Draco.” He gave me that look he always did when I was overly foul-mouthed or refused to pick up after myself. “I want to know if something’s up. Let’s go tomorrow.”
Ha. I KNEW it. At this point I went, Oh god he's already pregnant. XD

Ahhhhhh, lovely love fic ♥

What a nice review! That family scene at the end was so gushy and fluffy, I knew it had to be short, lest everyone get cavities. ;)

Thank you so much for reading and letting me know. <3

I loved this so much. I'm really terrible at writing coherent comments, but I want you to know how much I enjoyed reading this. The way you wrote Draco here -- with humor and sensitivity -- just perfect. And I loved the friendship between him and Hermione.

Good pregnant!Draco is basically my favorite thing to read and there's really not enough, so THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for writing such a great mpreg story!!!

Thank yoooou! I'm very happy you consider it good mpreg. It was a joy for me to write and a joy to see you reviewing at each installment. Thanks again. :D:D

reposting comment after realising I did it the first time with a mod account. D'oh!

I can't even start to tell you how much I loved this fic.. Okay... I'm lying. I can.

ahem... I adore how you wound the H/D story in with canon so seamlessly that I bought it without batting an eyelash. I loved all the sexy times between Draco and his three blokes, but the end there... guh... I simply go gaga over sexy "put a baby in me" talk.

Draco was fun and charming and very teenage in his development (as he should be) through the majority of the fic, and I loved reading from his prospective. I loved what you did with Montague's character as well and found myself with real tears in my eyes in the "during the battle scene." Blaise was brilliant too, all aloof and snarky, perfect fuck buddy, but not husband material.

I liked how you brought Hermione into it as well and how Ginny was sporty and flirty, a bit fiery and brazen, but you pulled off her interactions without character bashing her, which I appreciate. If it was my boyfriend in that situation, I can't say I wouldn't be acting out in a similar manner.

Thank you, thank you for all the time and effort you put into writing this lovely fic! It's an instant favorite of mine and one I'm sure I'll return to when I need a smile.

On Ginny bashing: Oh, I'm so glad you said that! I was worried. I didn't want anyone thinking I was bashing her or disliked her, but I don't think she would trust Draco, we already know she's a brazen lady, and I don't think she'd cope well at all with that ending between Harry and Draco! So, I'm glad if you think she came across human. :)

I'm very happy you liked it. Thanks for saying such kind things and making my day with a lovely review!

Oh my god. This fic! THIS FIC!

I just can't tell you enough times how much I love the voice you gave Draco. Man, it was such a blast being with him along with this amazing ride.

From the moment he knew he was pregnant, when he was telling his parents to the last surprise he has stored for Harry, I LOVED HIM.

There was that something so incredibly engaging (and even endearing) about him. His amazing sense of humour, the way he faced every moment, in his own brave way, you know what I mean? It was so Dracoish. :D

I loved how you wrote Harry, too. This last part was pure love for him, too. And Ron!

Weasley cut in. “Oy, everyone keeps thinking Harry was driving, but I was the one driving! Who do you think was parking the damn thing while he strutted in?”

That part was so full of teh awesome. All the way through I loved how you wrote Ron. Hermione, too, obviously! And Pansy! Ohh! And Goyle!

“Draco lived with the Dark Lord for a year and fought with a bum wand during the Battle. He’s more a man than you’ve ever been.”

HA! YOU GO GOYLE! :D

I loved it though. I loved how the moment Harry went to meet Draco to see Armand was so them, and so unlike them at the same time. Without the fighting and the drama, but that simple look that spoke volumes, you know what I mean?

And before that, that nearly interlude against the tree! Man!

I loved so many things, and let me tell you, that ending was pure gold. I loved how much it said about their relationship and the life they have together. It was perfect. :) Thank you, I enjoyed this more than I can tell.

THANKS CAPITU! <3

And thank you for giving such kind and lovely reviews for each chapter. It's been such fun posting this thing. And -- just ask Marianne -- I've been waiting and prodding at this thing for months, so it's a relief great folks such as yourself have enjoyed it.

Goyle is the man. I loved that guy. Just want to hug him. Also Ron! What would we do without loyal and funny supporting characters? And the tree scene made me swoon, and I wrote the damn thing. LOL!

Thank you, thank you, thanks a billion. :)

Draco Malfoy and the Secret Inheritance by nattish

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The Malfoy's reactions had me LOLOLing so hard - "charming garden" to describe Hargrid's house and Snape - I loved how he had he last laugh. And I think I fell in live with Harry (and Hermione!) all over again!!!

Just what I needed this summer. Brilliant mpreg fic!

Thank you very much! I had such fun writing this. <3

Thank you!! Cute user pic!

Loved this story!! First some favourite lines of brilliance:

Well, the war had been a lovely holiday, but now it was time to get back to the grind.

You’d be wrong. But you also know...sometimes I lie.

“What am I, the Virgin Malfoy?”

“I love how we have a marriage of equity and respect.”


Your Draco was just perfect. I loved his ideas about Ron/Hermione foreplay, and his mix of horror and pride at seeing himself in Hermione.

I loved Armand and Harry's interactions. Armand taking Harry's side after Harry publicly outed them was so cute!

The epilogue was perfect. Very cute and sweet, but as snarky and playful as the rest. Thank you for sharing this.

Thank you so much for reading. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! :)

I rec'd you on H/D Storyroom!!

http://hd-storyroom.livejournal.com/85700.html

I just loved this, Natt. After I finished part three I had to take some time to collect my feels. They were all over the place!
So romantic!!
I just love these boys so much, and you reminded me why <3

Thank you! I am very happy you enjoyed. And what a lovely rec at H/D Storyroom. I'm so very flattered. :))

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Oh, I'm glad it captured your interest. Thank you so much for letting me know. It was fun, fun, fun to write. :)

Perfect! I love your gay Draco. I love your oblivious Harry. I love ghost Snape! And the family at the end... just perfect. I will be re-reading this one soon.

How flattering, thank you!!

Cute kitty. :D

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Thank you! Detail-researching the canon and writing the story around it was a task, so I'm glad you got a kick out of it. Thanks for letting me know. :D

Completely delightful, by the time it ended! But getting there was one hell of a ride! I enjoyed reading this very much. :D

Thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed. <3

this was lovely :) I have a soft spot for smarmy, camp Draco and daft harry, and I thought it was lovely to see Draco with his son too. Boring his friends with talk of his baby! Adorable. (I have several friends and family members who have become parents for the first time recently, and I recognised a lot of it in Draco)

I also thought it was lovely how you treated Graham's and draco's relationship - like, it had substance.

Thank you for sharing :) it was a joy to read.

Ha! Perfect way to describe this Draco. I'm glad you enjoyed Draco and Graham's relationship, too. That mess really grew on me. Thanks so much for the lovely comment.

Are you going to put this on AO3 too?
Google pages never display right in my browser and downloading as an epub on AO3 is just perfect for my ereader.

I certainly can. I'll get on that in the next day or so. :)

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That was so amazing! I couldn't stop reading :O Brilliant! I would like to write a long expressive comment but I'm just bad at it :'( English isn't my first language so it's even worse :'( But I want you to know that reading that was really incredible experience for me ;) :D It was really original and just perfect :) Thank you :)

Oh, man thanks! No worries, your English is great. Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed. :))

Draco Malfoy and the Secret Inheritance

I tend to stay away from 1st person stories, and especially mpreg stories, but this one was listed on a ficrec and I decided to take a chance. It was the best decision I could have made! I laughed out loud at Draco's fantastically witty comments and wonderfully skewed perspective of events. (When Harry failed to be the strong, demanding lover that Draco was hoping for, and Draco conceded by throwing up his hands and saying “Fine, fuck it, I’ll just do everything."—I cracked up so hard). I stayed up late last night and am procrastinating as we speak simply because I could not stop reading! Oh the sweetness at the final battle, when Graham called Draco strong and said wistfully how he was so pleased to leave a son in this world (even if it wasn’t the case). And the sweetness when Harry pulled Draco to the tree, saying "It was always you." Ah and the ending about Draco gifting his pregnancy to Harry and knowing it was a girl! Oh my heart is just bursting with feels! Plus, Hermione's and Draco's relationship was just adorable and so fun to watch blossom. And you could tell that even with all the tragedy and tenseness surrounding the Malfoys, they really stuck close to one another and were a real family.
And I loved seeing the cannon plot intertwine with your story. You took all the great parts of HP and made them more fun. Oh it was just brilliant. I always love, too, when stories are recent. Being apart of the HP fandom is great because there are heaps and heaps of stories out there. But it takes some real work to wade thru the mass of fics and weed out the good ones. And finding stories that are recent is even more rare. So many of the classic HP stories are from the early-2000 era, before all of the books were even published. These stories are great, but I always feel a little sad and nostalgic reading them, knowing there's around a decade of disconnect between when the author wrote the story, and when I'm reviewing. I love more recent stories, and love knowing that the HP fandom is still alive and thriving with good-quality work. You've made my whole day with this story, and it's definitely one of my new favorites! Very, very well done! You've got quite a talent and I hope to read more from you!

Re: Draco Malfoy and the Secret Inheritance

Oh, your comment made my day. Thank you for telling me all the reasons you enjoyed yourself. I am especially flattered if you don't tend to be drawn to mpregs! I really enjoyed writing this, eapecially Draco's perspective and quirks. And I know what you mean about the heaps of older stories. It can be hard to navigate them, and it's sadly noatalgic in a way! I am glad you enjoyed the "old school" feel of this fic. Anyway, thank you so much for the detailed comment. It was a treat. :)

Dear God, I adored this fic. I so rarely see first-person POV in this fandom, but you did it and did it well. Draco's voice is perfect and I love all his sarcastic little asides.

I also loved how intertwined the events with canon. The fact that part of the fic takes place during HBP gives this fic a wonderful old school feel while still being clearly written after DH. I sort of see this fic as the ultimate mpreg fic because you handle the subject so well with just the right mixture of humor and seriousness. Great job!

Thanks so much! What a lovely comment. Draco was so fun to write and I am glad you enjoyed.

absolutely lovely! i dislike the first-person-perspective usually, especially if they address the reader. but somehow you made it work wonderfully well, now i know how first person should be written! i loved how draco's personality showed so clearly in the way he told this story. i really liked his characterization, and grahams, and harrys. wonderfully entertaining, i couldn't stop reading. great work!

Thank you! I am flattered to hear that you enjoyed it even though your don't tend to like first person pov. That person is fun for me, and I know it's not always preferred, so I am glad the risk paid off. Thanks again. <3

I enjoyed this story and your characters immensely! Having Draco's POV was a real treat, his sarcasm and humour as he was telling his story was so captivating and it gave a whole different backstory to the otherwise well-known canon - just brilliant!

I loved how your Draco and Harry were in character to the very end, and how Hermione took Draco under her wing, so to speak. And Goyle, he was just brilliant. I'm currently writing a story where Goyle is one of the main characters, and this was incredibly inspiring for me to read right now :)

This has been a very enjoyable read, so hot and funny and touching. Fantastic fic indeed!


Goyle is a doll (in my head, at least!). I'm pleased you enjoyed his characterization. Thank you for reading and letting me know. :)

I absolutely loved this story! Your characterisation of Draco was perfect, as well as the development of the other characters, and I loved the way you presented the story through 'flashbacks' at the beginning. Thank you so much for this amazing fic!

Thank you very much! :D

This story just blew me away. It succeeds on so many levels - you have a true talent with characterization, and with humor! I would read something with one meaning, and then go back to catch the double one - so very witty!

Draco was irresistable, and I commented on AOL that I absolutely loved how he always said the "wrong" thing. When he was a younger teen it was just so typical of the age, and as he got older it became a part of him, a way to deal with truth and pathos and emotion. Your hero Harry was larger than life, and the scene where he motored into the Great Hall and made a huge entrance was awesome! I loved how it was staged and how you made every occasion a way to shed light on everyone. Like when Harry spills the beans and Draco has to go through where every one of his friends is in his head, complete with sarcastic comments about Goyle and the sandwich bar.

You didn't shy away from the tragedy of war, and you kept everyone themselves but made more of them. Narcissa and Lucius were the epitome of this - Lucius had all his bravado and prejudices, but he had his way of humoring and protecting Draco, too, and he was tired and beaten down from the war as well. I felt so badly for the Montagues, esp. Graham! It was lovely that they kept their connection with Armand. And Snape - the way being a ghost enhanced his billowing cloak!

The history with William the Conqueror was great - I could go on and on. So much to love about this fic, and when I read it again I'll save up some more of my favorites to regale you with.

Oh, how complimentary! Thank you for this nice, thoughtful review. It made my day.

I'm tickled you enjoyed the Harry motoring in scene. That was one of my favorites, because of the image of Harry and Ron traveling back together -- a sort of throw back to them flying in with the Ford Anglia -- and because I often think Harry has a cocky side which he just barely lets show sometimes. Riding in on Sirius' bike with a leather jack is pretty hot, too.

Draco is such fun to write, and his family dynamics are even more fun for me. There's just enough in canon to hint what his family might be like, but not enough that I can't make up a ton and play around.

Anyway! I'm flattered you enjoyed the story and so grateful you let me know why. :)

this was just so perfect. And lovely. And so perfect. I can't even gush about this fic because I just want to read it all over again and sigh and cuddle with my stuffed pig >..< I loved the characterizations.
I loved Graham.
I loved Hermoine in this!
Hell I loved everyone in this.
Thank you sooo much for writing and sharing :) It's been a while since I enjoyed an H/D fic.

How sweet, thank you! Now I want a stuffed pig. :D

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